This writing I maid was for the parent of Elie who died in January 28.I am doing this writhing because I am reading the book night which has to do with the holocaust. Elie was a teen jew that had to survive during the holocaust with his father. At the end of the Book Elie’s father dies and the only survivor of his family is him.
He was a great guy, I loved him with all my heart at first. My life was perfect with him my mother and sister we had no problems and my dad had his own store our life was as we wanted until they came. The Germans were the reason for my fathers lost no one hated him that I knew of no one wanted him that I knew of except for Hitler.
My father was my life at first when the holocaust first started, I care about nothing but my father! As time past I got older, started to starve, and my father he was getting weaker and weaker as days past. Although my father was starving, and getting tired practically dead he would still take care for me and would watch for me as I watched for him. Well as time past I had two bodies instead of just one.
My father died with no peace and no dignity. I always thought me and my family would have a peacefully death that we would both de in the same cemetery each of use next to each other. Well as always the kids were always wrong but for once I was not.
I knew we should have had left the country we should had had left to the U.S or the Soviet Union I would have been with my family but I’m not.
I am not mad at my father but I don’t miss him but, I don’t think he deserved to die in this way! My mother, my father, my sister all together but don’t worry in a couple of years whe will all be together and be a happy family again as we were supposed to be!
This is a very powerful, emotional eulogy. I think you really capture the relationship that existed between the two of them. Be careful of some of your grammar and spelling errors. Remember, even though a blog assignment might not seem as "formal" as a paper, it is equally as important for you to check the spelling. In fact, since a blog is a public source, one could argue it's even MORE important for you to ensure your spelling and grammar is correct. 8/10
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